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She keeps herself guarded
    Away from the world,
Her heart has hardened.
    Distant and cold
She stands in the rain,
    So  raw and alone.
Will she ever find
    The key to her soul,
To a love that’s kind.
    A love that warms
And adores her so,
    That embraces the storm.
Ceasing the flash,
     And muffles the noise
While shackles turn to ash
     she kept herself guarded
but now is no more
     uncertainties are discarded
©2007-2009 ~indieXchick13
:iconindiexchick13:

Author's Comments

This poem represents my growth in love, I used to be soo guarded. It's been the one thing I've regretted over the years and all the people I pushed away because of... the pain i've felt in the past, but I've been working on it and for the first time in my life I feel free enough to share it with the world.


edit.....9/8/08

just read sarah dessin's new book Lock and Key it goes along perfectly with this poem it was kinda weord to read your own type of idea through someone elses perspective.

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:iconiainpettitt:
This is great, liking the rhythm here. my favourite piece so far!

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*RawEm0tion

"I can resist everything but temptation"
:iconindiexchick13:
thank you!!:hug:

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Stealing other's work is like a hickey you give your self : it doesn't count.


:blackrose: Sabina
:iconjobii:
I really like this. It flows really nicely =D Kinda short....but then theres the saying "short is sweet" or something. I think you accomplished that :XD:

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Avatar by cats-aint-waterproof yo :P
Be jealous :heart:
:iconindiexchick13:
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! :D Yeah, all my work is either short or super long But I think I do better when it's short...I tend to ramble lol

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Stealing other's work is like a hickey you give your self : it doesn't count.


:blackrose: Sabina
:iconjobii:
Haha hey well IIII liked it. ;P I'll prolly be patrolling through your artwork so beware. haha :XD:

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Avatar by cats-aint-waterproof yo :P
Be jealous :heart:
:iconindiexchick13:
thank you! feel free :D it seems lately it's gathering dust and it could use some attention.

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Stealing other's work is like a hickey you give your self : it doesn't count.


:blackrose: Sabina
:iconjobii:
Haha I noticed =( Tis sad cuz you are really good! Ya could use some attention! Ya know, remind me the next time I'm doing a journal and I'll feature you =D

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Avatar by cats-aint-waterproof yo :P
Be jealous :heart:
:iconindiexchick13:
EEK! really? I would love that!!!! thank you!!!!:hug:

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Stealing other's work is like a hickey you give your self : it doesn't count.


:blackrose: Sabina
:iconjobii:
Haha yup no problem. :) Just remind me ;P
:hug:

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Avatar by cats-aint-waterproof yo :P
Be jealous :heart:
:iconindiexchick13:
about what? lol jk um i'll try if i remember... *searches for post it note*

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Stealing other's work is like a hickey you give your self : it doesn't count.


:blackrose: Sabina

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